Here's somethin I wrote a few months ago., don't know y., but i felt like puttin it up my blog., n PLZ dont get me wrong., my life now is not in the sad tone as this is., i'm pretty happy :)
wat do u do when things dont go right ?
do u turn a blind eye to it or turn around n fight ?
life's never a 100 percent perfect or nice .,
somtimes it is., sometimes otherwise .,
wen u're not understood by ur friends., ur kin.,
it hurts like a splinter under ur skin.,
its there though u cant see it.,
makes u wanna give in., makes u wanna quit.,
but thats not life's all about., is it ?
its not bout standin helpless n takin a hit.,
Let 'em go., bygones are bygones.,
learn to dance to life's new tunes.,
this life is urs, make it better.,
dont let anythin be a fetter.,
i'm writin this dont mean i'm sad or desperate.,
but its hard to turn back time., may b its too late.,
i might hav lost somethin gr8 that i had.,
i'm not heartbroken though., jussst a lil sad.,
Life doesnt stop.., it moves on.,
time to put aside the things that r foregone.,
10 comments:
Kokaa :) landed here after a veryyyyyyyy long time!!!
nice piece of writing...
so whats new in life?
Let 'em go., bygones are bygones.,
learn to dance to life's new tunes.,
this life is urs, make it better.,
dont let anythin be a fetter.,
lyked these lines .. so true!!
difficult choice b/w those lines n ur pic ;)m
life's never a 100 percent perfect or nice .,
somtimes it is., sometimes otherwise
they wer nice mate!! really liked them actually liked the whole thing!!!..
off late i have been a regular visitor !!!
Superb poem and superb thoughts. Life is ups and downs but we have to go on with it.....
you've been tagged :D
that was a koool one dude;)
u really look to b man wid loadza talent :) if ya really mean everything wut ya wrote, n if ya really r as ya wrote, thennnnnn
SAME PINCH :D
hey buddy
you've been tagged
hey nice to read ur blog , its simple but interesting writings. yah , and I have tagged you.
dude i thot u weren't a big fan of poetry :D but tum toh chupe rustam nikle :)
Nice ont there... Abt my template i am planning to sit down and do sumthin abt it... was jus looking for a place to put up stuff i write... now i feel that i need to modify it :)
Anywayz have put up a non - poem write up a cpl of days back... so do give it a glance...
Keep writing poetry dude :)
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